Thursday, February 2, 2012

It's gotta be done!

Please make sure it’s done
No time for procrastinating
How much credit will you get none

A bum is not what you wanna be
It’s gotta be done
Do your work and then you’ll see

Please make sure its done
Even if it’s only a little
Or even  a ton
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9 comments:

  1. kristinrocheFebruary 2, 2012 at 5:38 PM

    I like the idea in your poem. I think some well placed punctuation will make a big difference here.

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  2. Girl_Who_Was_On_FireFebruary 3, 2012 at 5:37 AM

    I like this poem. It's funny.

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  3. Dan TFebruary 3, 2012 at 5:41 AM

    This is the like the best shizz ever. But throw some more punctuation in there.

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  4. Xx Brackenclaw xXFebruary 3, 2012 at 5:42 AM

    Nice ryhme scheme. I do agree some well placed punctuation is needed.

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  5. Alex M.February 3, 2012 at 5:46 AM

    With some refining it could be a funny peice.

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  6. MariaFebruary 3, 2012 at 5:54 AM

    short and straight to the point. i like it.

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  7. Jessica~GFebruary 3, 2012 at 5:55 AM

    punctuate that junk. but nicely done fool.

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  8. Adam214February 3, 2012 at 6:06 AM

    Good peice. Well put together.

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  9. RaquelFebruary 3, 2012 at 6:07 AM

    Love the rhyme. May need some commas in some lines.

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